I am really excited about where things are going with Year 9 at the moment, especially in Social Studies. Our PBL projects seem to be targetting the interests of our students and I am watching them develop even further as the young writers I saw emerge during the blogging that occurred throughout the GreenUp Project.
With this project, we considered two mandatory skills that every student should master – reading and writing. We adopted a Phase 1 – Reading & Comprehending with a focus on the core text Animal Farm followed by Phase 2 – Creative Writing. This time it was important to me that all teachers actively provided feedback to students using google docs. The students were able to select their online community using our school moodle site where we gave them options for groups of Napoleon, Squealer, Snowball, Mollie, Moses and Boxer. We ’sold’ the group by using blurbs beautifully composed by our new recruit Brad, that in many ways introduced the characters the students would meet throughout Animal Farm as well as bread crumb key issues that might arise in the novel. The introduction for Napoleon was:
“Napoleon emerged from the farmhouse, wearing both his medals, with his nine huge dogs frisking round him and uttering growls that sent shivers down all the animals’ spines.”
“Napoleon was now never spoken of simply as ‘Napoleon.’ He was always referred to in formal style as ‘our Leader, Comrade Napoleon,’ and the pigs liked to invent for him such titles as Father of all Animals, Terror of Mankind, Protector of the Sheepfold, Ducklings’ Friend, and the like.”
A wise man once said, ‘Power corrupts. Absolute power corrupts absolutely.’ Is it ever just to have a single person have absolute control? Why is power so seductive? Does it bring out the best or the worst in people?
Choose Napoleon to explore notions of power, control and the corruptive influence of absolute power.
From here, the facilitator of the group was able to set reflective tasks where they could monitor the students understanding of the text throughout their google doc as well as provide feedback on overall structure, spelling and grammar. Having a group of 23 as your responsibility was entirely manageable and the teacher could even set extra work and share the one document among all of their “Napoleonites”
CHAP 3 + 4
Comrades…
It is great to see our numbers growing and that everyone is engaging with the key concepts of Animalism. Old Major of course was very influential in planting the seeds of equality in the population of Manor Farm. It was of course.. ahem.. it was sad to see him pass but this just means that the need has risen for new leadership and new ways of achieving goals…
Please show me that you have understood this by answering the following questions. This is more than just comprehension – show me that you clearly are understanding the issues that are occurring and of course make observations on other characters. Remember always, that we Napoleonites are naturally equipped to take this farm to new levels!
How are the ideals of Animalism sacrificed in Chapter 3?
What is the impact of the Battle of the Cowshed? Why is it significant in Animal Farm’s history?
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What grew more satisfying was to see students engaging with the text and I was able to provide immediate feedback:
In my opinion if Old Major had been alive, to witness the relationship between these two extravagant pigs, he would have kicked himself. He would have thought, after all the explanation that he gave about: the way rebellion should work, we have these two pigs fighting to become a leader. This is all happening after he told the animals- “In order to achieve something we all must work as a team”. Excellent quote and reference to the text!
I think what we managed to achieve with MANY thanks to Dean Groom was to lower the ‘tech’ requirements in this project and have the kids read and write! By using google docs, it allowed for a manageable and very practical wasy of sharing work and providing feedback to our students.
Of course the next phase was to demonstrate creative writing skills – which will be assessed in the School Certificate AND the HSC – through Orwell’s excellent writing style. My class came up with some FANTASTIC work as we added our to our narrative building blocks.
In order to establish an awareness of description, we firstly considered our bland sentence (as a class):
“The tree grew in the playground”
We revisited our similes, metaphors, personification and adjectives so we could effectively ‘paint a picture’ using skillful imagery that is formed as a result of incorporating these literary devices. Each student completed the modifications of adding each technique at a time and I was simply astounded! Year 9 is incredible!
Our next step was a collaborative task which was to continue the narrative that began:
I opened the door and there before me was
The most impressive submission was entitled “The Beast”.
I opened the door and there before me was the most majestic animal I have ever seen. Its mane was as glorious and as bright as the sun in the morning sky. The glossy fur that laid upon its body was smooth as a freshly picked rose petal. Its stance as prestigious as the Queen of England. Its legs carries the courage of 90 brave soldiers put together. Blood was leaking from its recently killed prey, off its razor sharp teeth as his eyes gazed with rage. Still this threatening beast had the beauty of the Mona Lisa.
Each of the responses to this task provided me with evidence that my Yr 9 students had certainly demonstrated creative writing skills. We added to our narrative building blocks – setting, structure, characterisation, plot development and enjoyed a number of learning activities that saw the students continue to refine their writing styles.
I am really looking forward to the final product this week – Book in a Day – we are ready!